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【原创】《夜宿山村》点评

2014-11-28 12:05:58| 分类：诗联点评 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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夜宿山村

蔡正辉

玲珑楼阁紧相邻，灯火长明照碧云。

夜半笙歌无犬吠，游人不信在山村。

“玲珑楼阁”原非山村所有，从“紧相邻”看，居此楼阁者，显然已非一家一户。如此写山村，让人不禁横生疑窦，好生纳罕，起笔抓人。第二句趁势而为，曰“灯火长明照碧云”。由“照碧云”可想见“灯火”之辉煌，“楼阁”之华美，这就更不是山村景象了。灯火长明，笙歌半夜，若是先前山村定当引起鸡鸣狗吠，而第三句忽作一转，云此地鸡犬已见惯不惊，俨然城中宠物，处之泰然。经如此这般层层铺垫，结句“游人不信在山村”之感叹，已成弦上之箭，不得不发，真所谓水到渠成。细观本诗，妙在构思，犹美人对镜梳妆，扫蛾眉，傅脂粉，点绛唇，蓦然回首，转眸一笑。呜呼，爱美之人，当抚掌而叹，击节而歌矣！

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