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【原创】联评二则

2016-03-02 11:08:36| 分类：诗联点评 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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咏葱陈本立

何惧赴汤成碎末，

不辞投釜斗膻腥。

被切成“碎末”，“赴汤”“投釜”，化解“膻腥”，非葱而何？然联家咏葱却不拘于葱，从“何惧”“不辞”看，分明是言在此而意在彼，使人不禁联想到诸多坚守公义、勇斗邪恶的志士仁人。此联若只是咏葱则失之于浅，如直接说人则失之于白。由葱及人方生动形象，令读者生无限联想，得无穷趣味。鲁迅先生说“选材要严，开掘要深”，写小说、杂文是如此，写诗作联也是这样。南岳怀让当年应答六祖云“说是一物即不中”，妙在不即不离，不黏不脱。

交通春联曾庆达

条条玉带似铺宣，凭他兴致裁长短；

滚滚车轮如撰对，任我情怀论短长。

“玉带似铺宣”，“车轮如撰对”。新颖别致，真可谓想落天外。然曾先生并没有收索枯肠，绞尽脑汁，他不过将其日常言语信手拈来而已。作者是书家，亦是联家。此联之奇思妙想显然打上了他鲜明的“自我”烙印、靓丽的个性色彩。佛祖降世，指指天，指指地，说：“天上天下，唯我独尊。”此公案旨趣并不是说佛是宇宙的主宰，而是说要在天上天下无处不安宁，无处不自在，必须了悟“自我”本性。了悟“自我”，我即是佛，便可离烦恼，得解脱，登彼岸。“自我”是金山，是宝库，是粮是水是空气，参佛悟道、喂马劈柴不可须臾离也，写诗作对、吟咏性情亦不可须臾离也。

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